tyrone

[tyrone]

name- tyrone
age- 18
gender- male
rank-Raikage
Village-Kumogakure
Karma Type-nutral-both
Personality-serious-joy full-hiden anger-perverted-killer bees personality
Height-5.5
Weight-109
Blood Type-ab
History-had a ruth life tesed every day
tyrone had his dad killer bee and he had
his advantiges as the Raikage as uncle
later at 12 he learnd how to fight and
was skilled at the wepon his mom died
when he was 2 so he could not remember her
when he turnd 18 he was an power full ninja
it was time four an new Raikage and tyrone
was chosen to be the 5th Raikage and
seald in him

Element-Lightning
Kekkei Genkai-Hachibi
Starting Weapons-mini swords long lightning sword
Starter Jutsu-zuse shadow clone-Jinchûriki Transformations-
flying
Rules' Phrase-moulin rouge

[Chie Masami]

Disapproved.

[tyrone]

what bout now

[Chie Masami]

Needs a lot more.

First of all, please, use the template (Click Here).
Second, you need to fill in more details: just dead parents, avenging nature and stolen Akatsuki Cloak isn't good. Besides, if he has no heart, he can't be making friends.

Please, fix.

[tyrone]

i fixed it

[Chie Masami]

Almost accepted.

All you need left, is to choose either: Hachibi or Black Lightning, and the Rule's Phrase, found in the rules.
I'd give you the Chakra Nature - Lightning, no extras.

In addition, I need to see to more personality.

And, this is just a question, but... Do you really want to start with only 1 Jutsu?

[tyrone]

all i fixed it

[Chie Masami]

Approved!
Welcome, Raikage.